tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post5770638230223156541..comments2023-10-01T04:23:07.450-07:00Comments on Desperate Sims: The Price of SinAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-13866132604266843602011-05-30T21:55:18.424-07:002011-05-30T21:55:18.424-07:00@TW:
Hehehe, yeah! That's just the 'label...@TW:<br /><br />Hehehe, yeah! That's just the 'label sort' menu; those're all the characters that'll appear regularly in her musings. ^-^ That's a cute coincidence, heh!<br /><br />It's still about a month-ish away from that blog kicking off, but I'm so excited you're looking forward to it! Won't be too long before Kenzie appears here, though... ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-90949963671490754652011-05-30T21:51:52.125-07:002011-05-30T21:51:52.125-07:00I just checked out Yours Truly, Margo again, and I...I just checked out Yours Truly, Margo again, and I saw a Kenzie link! And an Ian one, which is funny because that's my fiance's name in real life. teehee I wonder what you're going to do with that...both links appear to be empty now but I look forward to reading Margo's blog! :DTender Wolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13874882716131293841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-1006909776723049712011-05-30T16:03:58.448-07:002011-05-30T16:03:58.448-07:00Okay. I just didn't want my sim to be running ...Okay. I just didn't want my sim to be running around all unemployed, as he'd probably cause some problems. <br /><br />Yay! Can't wait!LordCharleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06164297836786342412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-32173779188324055222011-05-30T15:56:40.050-07:002011-05-30T15:56:40.050-07:00@LordCharles:
Very cool! But, I actually have Cha...@LordCharles:<br /><br />Very cool! But, I actually have Charles le Sim's career and such figured out--but I'll keep that in mind in case I decide to change mind. It's still a while yet before all that will come into the story.<br /><br />Next post is in the works--got it all screenshotted, just need to write it. I'm guessing, it'll appear tonight or tomorrow. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-15499320309441936292011-05-30T15:52:43.214-07:002011-05-30T15:52:43.214-07:00@MJ:
Thank you so much, MJ! <333
Travis reall...@MJ:<br /><br />Thank you so much, MJ! <333<br /><br />Travis really is a bit horrible at making great decisions, unfortunately. :( And yes--he did want to tell her he loved her. She wouldn't let him, though... She was in too much pain to want to endure hearing it. T_T<br /><br />There definitely are a lot of people that seek love elsewhere when they can't find it in their own marriage. Whether they'll still be together or not for much longer because of it... Guess you'll have to see.<br /><br />Thanks again, dear. *muah!*Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-23924185662983623312011-05-30T15:38:27.627-07:002011-05-30T15:38:27.627-07:00Hi! I just wanted to tell you that I neglected to ...Hi! I just wanted to tell you that I neglected to give my Simself a job before uploading him, but I do work as a 7th grade English teacher, so if you want to you can give him a job at the school as a Middle School Teacher. Thanks!<br /><br />P.S.- Not to rush you, I'm just wondering when the next chapter might come out.LordCharleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06164297836786342412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-88928943607283138482011-05-30T07:01:19.920-07:002011-05-30T07:01:19.920-07:00Great chapter!
It was really intense.
I feel s...Great chapter! <br /><br />It was really intense. <br /><br />I feel sorry for Travis, but what he did is making it worse.<br />Did he want to say that he loves Lolly? <br /><br />It's so close to real life. I mean, some people would do what Travis did, being in a loveless marriage at the moment. <br /><br />The crime scenes are perfect. Your writing is excellent also. <br /><br />Can't wait to see the next update.Di Al Martini https://www.blogger.com/profile/11406490707658294309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-70668199627676841022011-05-28T16:16:09.278-07:002011-05-28T16:16:09.278-07:00@Seaweedy:
Thank you! <3
I definitely feel ba...@Seaweedy:<br /><br />Thank you! <3<br /><br />I definitely feel bad for Lolly--I haven't given her one break since she first entered the story. At least Shark's end was quick; he didn't have to suffer like her. :(Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-29690771392943672022011-05-28T16:15:25.212-07:002011-05-28T16:15:25.212-07:00@TenderWolf:
Hehehe! >:D Glad I captured your ...@TenderWolf:<br /><br />Hehehe! >:D Glad I captured your attention! It definitely was SO intense to write, it took me longer than usual.<br /><br />Is Carolina behind the murder? Lisa? Someone else? Interesting questions--guess you'll have to see. But as for Lisa--yep, she is Naomi's sister. This is her first real appearance in the story.<br /><br />Hehehe--is Travis gonna end up with another kid? Man... That would be pretty horrible, wouldn't it? *cackle* But yes, you're right--his first 'illegitamte child' technically isn't even his.<br /><br />Thank you so much, TW! <333Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-33028268107478198882011-05-28T16:12:37.594-07:002011-05-28T16:12:37.594-07:00@Jennifer:
Awwww. XD Thanks!! The parts with Trav...@Jennifer:<br /><br />Awwww. XD Thanks!! The parts with Travis/Lolly were the hardest, since I wanted to make reallyreally sure to create empathy for both parties--neither are perfect, but neither are the 'enemy' either. Just two people that are suffering.<br /><br />Backfire is right--Jeb's gotta start learning his lessons the hard way. Hopefully Tana will make him listen, buuutt... *chintap*<br /><br />LOL!! Are you talking about me, missy? ;) ;) *tease* I'm glad you liked the song, though--it's growing to be one of my favorites. I could actually see it capturing the essence of most everything that happens this season... "Everybody's gotta learn sometime."<br /><br />Thank you sososososo much, Jen--you really are so sweet. <33Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-34731919995243346022011-05-28T16:08:53.758-07:002011-05-28T16:08:53.758-07:00@LordCharles:
Thanks, dear! <333
Yeah, Travis...@LordCharles:<br /><br />Thanks, dear! <333<br /><br />Yeah, Travis is too main of a character--not that I have a problem killing off main characters, but there won't be any main character deaths this season. ^^ And nooo... His ability to be faithful is just--blech. ;D<br /><br />You're very right about Jeb--that and he knows the criminals in town better than anyone else--but it puts himself closer to the eye of the law then he'd like to be.<br /><br />I am WAY excited about Alesha's baby, too... Won't be long til that ray of sunshine (cough) comes into the world!<br /><br />Thanks for the comments LC, sorry it took me so long to respond! <3Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-31837459456633591532011-05-28T06:11:21.562-07:002011-05-28T06:11:21.562-07:00An excellent chapter, I feel bad for Shark and Lol...An excellent chapter, I feel bad for Shark and Lolly as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-60812606433783165312011-05-24T22:25:52.896-07:002011-05-24T22:25:52.896-07:00YAY, ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! :**: Wowza, you really had...YAY, ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! :**: Wowza, you really had me on the edge of my seat Kaleeko! Poor Shark! I wonder if Carolina is behind the murder, and if she had her daughter break in to the Botegga the first time. Lisa is Naomi's sister I presume? And what an interesting relationship she's having with Travis. Oh boy...I hope he doesn't end up with another illegitimate child. roflmao Although that would be quite dramatic. :D Lolly clearly wants nothing more to do with him, and if I recall right, her son isn't biologically his, which she confessed in the last chapter.<br /><br />Another great write Kaleeko, can't wait to read more!!! *waits impatiently*Tender Wolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13874882716131293841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-25331719121791881002011-05-23T01:18:00.948-07:002011-05-23T01:18:00.948-07:00Damn it! I forgot to mention those extra shots you...Damn it! I forgot to mention those extra shots you took. <br /><br />Whoa, talk about Racy! But great job! <br /><br />Travis you are such a bad bad boy!Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04261344314447423273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-14317638849909132522011-05-23T01:11:22.130-07:002011-05-23T01:11:22.130-07:00I can see why this chapter was causing you some gr...I can see why this chapter was causing you some grief to write, but seriously though you did a fabulous job of it.<br />The crime scene shots were especially cool as well as the scenes of Travis, enjoying his extra curricular activities. lol<br /><br />You always seem to capture exactly what your trying to convey. I envy that. ;)<br /><br />This is going to be fun to see Jeb in charge of the investigation. And he was the one who set up this 'little mousetrap', hmmmm, looks like things back fired on him. <br />I don't blame Tana for walking off in a huff after telling Jeb he can clean up his own mess. She is risking a lot just knowing what he is up too.<br /><br />Travis what in the hell are you doing? Honestly. <br />You picked the perfect song too for his scenes. Man he really just lets go after he's got a few drinks in him. Reminds me of another red head I know. ;)<br /><br />Can't wait to see where this is all headed. Definitely interesting times ahead for The Kanes!Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04261344314447423273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-58702787903052596392011-05-22T04:26:16.491-07:002011-05-22T04:26:16.491-07:00Shark!!! Wow, great chapter!!! Is Travis to big of...Shark!!! Wow, great chapter!!! Is Travis to big of a character to be next on the hit list? He just doesn't have the capability to be faithful, does he?<br /><br />I think it's good Jeb is in charge of the murder investigation-- he can cover up a lot of stuff that the cops might find. <br /><br />I'm also really excited for Alesha's baby. Margo's so cute, and it would be adorable to see the two kids playing together!!!<br /><br />LCLordCharleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06164297836786342412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-73051156502575300302011-05-21T22:06:13.924-07:002011-05-21T22:06:13.924-07:00She's a performance artist. I've never lik...She's a performance artist. I've never liked performance art even when I was a youngster.<br /><br />When she pops out of her egg thingy it reminds me of Spinal Tap when the pod wouldn't open and Christopher Guest's character had to perform stuck in the giant pod. <br /><br />Your generation...pfft. Get off my lawn!Chrysamehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02989562334141226671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-84215138616059454992011-05-21T21:52:16.284-07:002011-05-21T21:52:16.284-07:00My lips are sealed about the hit list. ;) You'...My lips are sealed about the hit list. ;) You'll have to speculate amongst yourselves!<br /><br />Awww... See, I absolutely love Lady Gaga--but she's definitely someone of my generation's mindset. I can understand why she might not appeal to you. ;) <333 Sounds like you may need a different show to watch tonight, though!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-63857081696596471112011-05-21T21:50:08.707-07:002011-05-21T21:50:08.707-07:00Hahaha, PiB--I hear ya. ;) I seem to have a proble...Hahaha, PiB--I hear ya. ;) I seem to have a problem with writing wall-o-comments. XD<br /><br />I think I recall you saying that--and IIRC, I was a bit amused by it on my end. ;) Unfortunately, Jeb failing requires an Epic Fail, which has far reaching consequences. In the end, he created a monster he couldn't quite control--something his whole family's going to pay for.<br /><br />Have to say--it was a fun plot to devise. >:DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-89812028378424694572011-05-21T21:49:38.161-07:002011-05-21T21:49:38.161-07:00Who is next on the hit list? I have a feeling Car...Who is next on the hit list? I have a feeling Carolina is going to get her revenge in as many ways as possible. She's had a long time to think about it. <br /><br />Off topic: I'm watching Saturday Night Live...what the hell is wrong with Lady Gaga? I'm too damn old for this crap. *puts on grumpy face*Chrysamehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02989562334141226671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-75426292648927061752011-05-21T21:44:21.245-07:002011-05-21T21:44:21.245-07:00Number 11 is my fav too.
I did listen to the song...Number 11 is my fav too.<br /><br />I did listen to the song as I read the last bit, just forgot to comment - not to mention I didn't want to look like I was trying to take over your wall with a comment that went on longer than the post. :)<br /><br />Way back when this season was starting I might have said something to the effect of "Wouldn't it be interesting to see Jeb fail?" That's still an interesting idea, but the fact that it might badly damage the whole family wasn't a thought I had in mind.PiB - Nicarrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17798991335165490144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-80996461864046918862011-05-21T21:42:51.370-07:002011-05-21T21:42:51.370-07:00*snicker* Oh ye with dirty mind! <3 ;) Not that...*snicker* Oh ye with dirty mind! <3 ;) Not that I'm ANY better, I obviously set the shots up in the first place...<br /><br />You are totally right--Travis's real brain just isn't smart/strong enough to control his impulses. -_- And the booze doesn't help!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-81629283873867697012011-05-21T21:37:17.329-07:002011-05-21T21:37:17.329-07:00Picture 10 is very sexy. I like number 11. It...Picture 10 is very sexy. I like number 11. It's more graphic but the placement of her raised leg is perfect. Travis defines the saying thinks with his little brain.Chrysamehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02989562334141226671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-55975270109838491922011-05-21T21:31:26.345-07:002011-05-21T21:31:26.345-07:00NOTE:
To those who are... curious... there are a ...NOTE:<br /><br />To those who are... curious... there are a lot of shots from this post I cut out; I only needed a couple, so I took a ton of extras trying to get the right angles, and some of them turned out pretty smokin'. So I am going to share. ;D<br /><br />WARNING: Mature imagery. ;)<br />https://picasaweb.google.com/kaleeko/OhTravis?authkey=Gv1sRgCMzgor_YnMqLsgE#<br /><br />I think #10 is my fave. <3Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4909462020307292291.post-30316713393614310142011-05-21T21:28:37.189-07:002011-05-21T21:28:37.189-07:00@Chrysame:
<33333 Aww! Thanks for mentioning t...@Chrysame:<br /><br /><33333 Aww! Thanks for mentioning the song--I was wondering if anyone listened to it while reading. It honestly totally inspired the theme of those post.<br /><br />You're right; it's darkest before the dawn... but the dawn is a looonng ways off. They all have a rough road ahead of them.<br /><br />OH MAN Chrysame. *dies laughing!* I can see it now... Inmates drawing little hearts in the air as Officer Wyatt walks by. ;D He's a total heartthrob, ain't he?<br /><br />I'm glad that you've felt the Lolly roller-coaster, too; she was a character that always drove me nuts, but even as the writer she found a way to win me over in the end.<br /><br />Thank you so much, Chrysame! *glomp* <333Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13913779863370524491noreply@blogger.com